Answer my plea, uncover mystery
Rebirth, yet walking familiar grounds
Rivers overflow with uncertainty
Senses bubble, two souls echoing sounds
Shimmering glaze cast over our embrace
Explain to me the sweet understanding
Happiness abound amidst empty space
Creation of nectar out of nothing
Newfound pleasure invigorates senses
The shelter inside our sphere is perfect
Flooded river plain, voiding defenses
No will to break free, cannot disconnect
Stability opens its gaping jaws
Embracing the darkness without a pause
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Where did you come up with these poem?? Really sharp imagery....precise language...they're wonderful work...very mature. You actually understand the concept of near rhyme and use it effectively. The thinking is downright profound. I like what you're doing. Think seriously about submitting a couple piecesfor the Creative WRiting award at Senior Honors night. It would look good on your resumé.
explain to me the sweet understganding...Happiness abound(s?) amidst empty space is particularly cool, although you might consider making amidst into midst or something one syllable
Stability opens its gaping jaws is an awesome oxymoron
there's a bunch of great lines here...I'd enjoy talking about more, if you're interested
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